A statement of purpose can be grammatically correct and still be weak. Common problems include vague motivation, unsupported claims, repetition, weak programme fit and missing evidence.
Who it is for
Scholarship applicants
Master's applicants
PhD applicants
Applicants who already have an SOP or personal statement draft and want specific feedback
How it works
Paste your SOP or personal statement.
Add the programme, scholarship, university, prompt, word limit or criteria where available.
Oblanky critiques the document and shows what is working, what is weak and what to change.
What you receive
Overall assessment
What you did well
Critical issues
Requirement coverage
Paragraph-level feedback
Specific recommendations
Short example improvements where useful
Clear next steps
Key features
Critique rather than automatic full-document replacement
Checks clarity, structure, evidence, alignment, authenticity and missing requirements
Actionable paragraph feedback
One paid critique per purchase
Standard price$7 / ₦10,000
Active Premium price$5.6 / ₦8,00020% off each standalone purchase